Try getting real voice actors
Nothing kills a clip more than shit dialogue with terrible recording quality. Idea had potential.
Cheesy as fuck dialogue.
The nursery rhyme songs integrated with better production and heavier atmosphere just blew me away, and the way it worked so well with the animation and theme was amazing.
This would be
fucking awesome as a PSP homebrew game. Seriously.
I really like it.
This is inspiring.
I glad to hear that, but I'm worried a song like this might be inspiring in a bad way....
I really like your melodies, they just compliment each other so well.
Once I -
Get past the really obvious digital drums + bass guitar to hear the actual riffs and such, it's really good. I don't normally listen to rock, so don't quote me on this, but those are some sweet lead melodies.
Glad you liked it. It was just a song idea, I'm hoping to find the right mesh of melodies to make this into a full song.
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