Try getting real voice actors
Nothing kills a clip more than shit dialogue with terrible recording quality. Idea had potential.
Cheesy as fuck dialogue.
The nursery rhyme songs integrated with better production and heavier atmosphere just blew me away, and the way it worked so well with the animation and theme was amazing.
The -1 star is for the animation, but that was still good don't get me wrong.
Even for a preview;
You should really finish it. It just ended abruptley.
Didn't make sense, jokes were shit and relatively offensive; blam this piece of crap!
Suck it up butter cup
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