Try getting real voice actors

Nothing kills a clip more than shit dialogue with terrible recording quality. Idea had potential.

Good animation-

Cheesy as fuck dialogue.

Simply fantastic.

The nursery rhyme songs integrated with better production and heavier atmosphere just blew me away, and the way it worked so well with the animation and theme was amazing.

This would be

fucking awesome as a PSP homebrew game. Seriously.
I really like it.

Hah

This is inspiring.

Once I -

Get past the really obvious digital drums + bass guitar to hear the actual riffs and such, it's really good. I don't normally listen to rock, so don't quote me on this, but those are some sweet lead melodies.